Alyssa, I like the narrative story of your 100 word challenge. However, you will need to go back and correct some things.
1. Please watch spelling e.g using apostrophes correctly e.g I'm 2. Think about where speech marks should go when a character is speaking. 3. Check all your capital letters and especially those that may not have one but should e.g proper nouns 4. Creeped should be crept.
Keep working on it as the effort will be worth it, so it reads better than it does at the moment.
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Alyssa, I like the narrative story of your 100 word challenge. However, you will need to go back and correct some things.
1. Please watch spelling e.g using apostrophes correctly e.g I'm
2. Think about where speech marks should go when a character is speaking.
3. Check all your capital letters and especially those that may not have one but should e.g proper nouns
4. Creeped should be crept.
Keep working on it as the effort will be worth it, so it reads better than it does at the moment.
Miss H
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