Good effort Alyssa, most of your speech marks are in the correct place. You have forgotten the closing speech mark after 'BOO HOO HOO'. Remember to also pay attention to other traits of good writing, such as correct capital letters and full stops. An excellent job over all, ka pai mahi!
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Good effort Alyssa, most of your speech marks are in the correct place. You have forgotten the closing speech mark after 'BOO HOO HOO'. Remember to also pay attention to other traits of good writing, such as correct capital letters and full stops. An excellent job over all, ka pai mahi!
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